I was bored. Some places in need of updating. Either due to IC reasons or OOC reasons
Dragon Claw Tavern - Current description states it as being on the southern end of the Town Green just north of the Park. Which makes a lot of sense based on the original map of Ramsalon when the Town Green was north of the Park. Now, the Park is on the North side of the Town Green....you can see the dilemma.
Haven Croft - states it rises over the river to the north and the ocean to the south. Kind of true but a bit misleading, well to me anyways. From that description, it gives me the impression that the Habrin flows east-west rather than north-south.
Kanestronia Plaza - the first sentence of the description just sounds a bit off. Plus a typo. Just needs a little polish
White Rose University - has no description
Traders Pier - Is the Narwhal ship of super importance that it deserves to be part of the description?
Seashore - The map shows piers going the full length of Wayward Ho. Does the map or the description need some rework, considering most of these piers are the large type to handle the larger sailing vessels. Or do we need to remove a pier to make a map spot for the "scenic lookout" location?
--Court of Heroes--
Cavum - Can't speak for SH Order's toon, Rob Cearbhall, but I do know that Griffith left back for Grom. Might want to change that part in the description.
Tailoring Shop - Just needs a description
Shinkantown - Oh the description of it's location is so...so misleading. Definitely needs some rework.
Herbs and Acupuncture Shop - Just needs a description
(I assume these four places survived the Naga Nori War?)
Sparring Grounds - Has the Grand Park description for it's locale.
Park of Hope - 2 mile walking path. Is that length or just total distance? And if it is large, with the Grand Park so near, perhaps just combining the two and modifying the map to reflect that?
Sinkhole - Says NW corner of cemetery. Is that in the North district? Do we want to move it to a sub-district?
Crypts - Something about the description just sounds strangely worded to me Also, where is it?
Kane Coliseum - where is it? We have the district broken into sub-districts, so which one is it in? Found it, it's in "Housing South". Move it maybe to there?
--Housing North - Description refers to a garage and automatons. Enough said winks.
Okay, that's all I saw. Any detailed or updated city maps in the works?
Edit: changed the title, less presumptuous. Modified a few things in hopes that my usual snarky tone is well, less snarky. laughs As well as clarity.