Mostly for Setting to take a look over.
Well sort of.
On Sophia I need references to mountainese in her background changed to San-Saram, I think there is just the one, but its been something that has been bugging me XD
Next I would like to kind of update Yalara's background, it hasn't really changed, but removed some of the old terminology and added in some mention of how she got involved in the military.
Yalara displayed an aptitude for the medical sciences from a very young age, and with very encouraging parents, and seeking every opportunity she could in the town to expand her learning.
She later managed to work her way up to attending a university, however it was during this time her father suddenly disappeared with no trace. This ended up distressing her greatly and she ended up just throwing herself further into her education. Though she wound up joining the Southern Coalition military in order to help cover the remainder of her education.
She continued her work and service in the Southern Coalition military even once her dues have been returned in service rendered. She had come to enjoy the lifestyle and opportunites to be had. Even more so it enabled her access to many places of which she wouldn't have otherwise been able to get in to help provide medical services.
Eventually this lead to a nomination to be part of the Southern Coalition Fleet which she had accepted, becoming a member of the medical and research personnel of the Extravia.
If any problems just lemme know and can see about removing them. Thanks!